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Journal Entry: Sun Jan 13, 2008, 6:40 AM

Examples of good critique


This was done for The Lit Crit Contest, which is now closed. You can read all the entries in this news article: Crit Haul. We received 40 entries in all. The results are here.

:new: What makes critique good

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I asked people to send me some of the best crits they've received on deviantART and that resulted in the following list. I'm quite pleased with the number and very impressed with the quality. All this while I thought I was the only one getting awesome crits. :P

The purpose of this: a) to show you how wonderful both the critics and receivers of crit (crittees?) are, and b) to show you that there are different styles of critiquing.

POETRY CRITS

`AbCat's critique of ^GeneratingHype's poem, Gerry
~Aladdin-Sane's critique of `SparrowSong's poem, Heading Westward
~Aladdin-Sane's critique of `SparrowSong's poem, School of Poetry
*fllnthblnk's critique of ^lovetodeviate's poem, To Open
^GeneratingHype's critique of ^lovetodeviate's poem, The room must be pristine
*jonzoiplu's critique of ^lovetodeviate's poem, In Bangalore City
*jonzoiplu's critique of =Negated's poem, why can't I hear you anymore?
*Mnesimache's critique of =Negated's poem, why can't I hear you anymore?
*salshep's critque of ^lovetodeviate's poem, As a rock
`SparrowSong's critique of ^GeneratingHype's poem, Out-dated
~Sporenza's critique of `Beccalicious's poem, Harmony
~TheHungerArtist's critique of *itzjusdrama's poem, Paint Our World
*tightwhitepants's critique of *salshep's poem, The Suitor
~warytransgressor's critique of =Negated's poem, arctic tern

PROSE CRITS

*Amberlouie's critique of *wordworks's prose piece, Dreams
~ancient-seeker's critique of =Negated's prose piece, The Statue and The Poet
^GeneratingHype's critique of *wordworks's prose piece, Dreams
^GeneratingHype's critique of ^lovetodeviate's prose piece, Polished Forks
`GunShyMartyr's critique of ~CrystalSeeker's prose piece, City life
`GunShyMartyr's critique of =trippedinahole's prose piece, Mrs. Sarah Beecher
*jimboistic's critique of *wordworks's prose piece, Monsters
`Jon-Law's critique of *wordworks's prose piece, Dreams
*simeberg's critique of *wordworks's prose piece, Monsters
`SparrowSong's critique of ^lovetodeviate's prose piece, How Can I Be a Prophet?
=SunOwl's critique of `Beccalicious's prose piece, Buying a lilac room
*TTBranwen's critique of *wordworks's prose piece, Monsters

In December 2007, ^GeneratingHype asked us senior types to critique one person for Christmas. It was a good challenge for us all. Check out the news article: Secret Senior: Edition One

In December 2006, ~FatherLitmas was the forerunner-of-sorts of the above project; it was open to everyone: Merry Litmas--Results!

I'm still looking for examples of good critique and I will keep updating this. So do let me know if you find one. :)

Why should we critique?


`SparrowSong's journal: The Top Seven Reasons to Crit Lit :new:

Discussions on critique


*apocathary's forum thread: Receiving Critique

`Beccalicious's journal: Why do you critique on other peoples' deviations?

*Amberlouie's journal: When does Constructive Criticism become a shark attack? Either list what makes a good crit, or what's the cardinal rule of critiquing, and when do you think the line trips people up between good and bad, rude and lovely?

=Squarix's poll: When giving critique, which do you think is the better tone to have? (80% have said "harsh" so far)

Am I missing any good discussions?

How to critique


No, these aren't rules or step-by-step instructions. They're just guidelines. I think they're useful -- the first two have been very useful to me, definitely; as for the third, I wrote it. So in some ways this is shameless publicity. But if you'd like to go ahead and read it, I would much appreciate it. Most of my opinions in that editorial come from having interacted with many wonderful critics. I owe them a lot. In the comments section, you'll find that I have received excellent critique on the deviation and I've tried to revise accordingly. Okay, enough talk.

:bulletred: CRITIQUE by `tangledweb

:bulletred: A Verbose Guide to Critiquing by ~MavRyk

:bulletred: A Guide to Good Critique (Literature) by ^lovetodeviate

:star: ~rowenabrennavart has compiled a much longer list of useful links in her journal: Critique: How To.

What else do you think I should add to this journal?





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:icongeneratinghype:
If you are willing to turn this into a deviation, and are not planning on dropping it in *Writers-Workshop's gallery, *WordCount would be happy to post it.

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:iconlovetodeviate:
Sounds good to me. What do you need me to do?

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For Writers: Resource Central: Part One | Resource Central: Part Two
:iconcomrade-kelly:
Ooh, this is a lovely journal and I really enjoy this critique.
The link to Beccalicious' journal is missing the url bit, I think, and those are really good critiques. Having always enjoyed a good crit, it bothers me I'm so bad at giving them, I think. So I really did like the guidelines and stuff--it sort of helped me sort my thoughts. I tend to have too much going on in my head and then I don't know how to just put everything together. Nice to see something that gives me a little framework. :aww:

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:iconjonzoiplu:
i can't say for certain, or list, a number of helpful critiques, but some of the best advice i've received was when a friend quoted ezra pound, 'accuracy of statement is the sole morality of writing', and proceeded to whittle away at my work.

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:iconmnesimache:
There's some interesting deviations in that crit contest. I've chosen a couple and I'm hoping to start it soon.

How're you doing?
:iconlovetodeviate:
Thanks! I'm glad you find it useful. As for worrying about a being a bad critic, don't! I'm sure you're much better than you think you are. It just takes practice.

You should try my crit contest. It'll be fun, if not anything else. :)

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For Writers: Resource Central: Part One | Resource Central: Part Two
:iconlovetodeviate:
Cool, I'll be looking forward to your entries, then.

I'm not too well. I should probably not be at my computer, but I had to do some work for *Writers-Workshop and I was curious to know if I had more entries or not. How're you?

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For Writers: Resource Central: Part One | Resource Central: Part Two
:iconmnesimache:
Well, as I type this it's about ten in the morning; I'm in the university library and I'm looking for some stuff online. Killing time before my seminar on 18th and 19th Century Literature. I think we're studying Sense and Sensibility today.
:icongeneratinghype:
I keep meaning to direct you to this link, too: [link]

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Books read/re-read in 2009 (in alphabetical order of author)

My rating system

:bulletblue: Must read!
:bulletblack: OK/Good
:bulletred: Never again
:bulletpurple: Er

:new: = Recently read


Novels/novellas

:bulletblue: Things Fall Apart - Chinua Achebe, 1958
:bulletpurple: She - Anonymous, 1975
:bulletblack: Sense and Sensibility - Jane Austen, 1811
:bulletblue: Crash - JG Ballard, 1973
:bulletblack: Running Wild - JG Ballard, 1988
:bulletblue: Two Serious Ladies - Jane Bowles, 1943
:bulletblue: The Sheltering Sky - Paul Bowles, 1949 :new:
:bulletblue: Ender's Game - Orson Scott Card, 1985 :new:
:bulletblue: Crime and Punishment - Fyodor Dostoevsky, 1866, translated from the Russian by David McDuff
:bulletblue: The Trial - Franz Kafka, 1925
:bulletblack: A Life Transparent - Todd Keisling, 2007
:bulletblack: Fly Away Peter - David Malouf, 1982
:bulletpurple: After Dark - Haruki Murakami,2004, translated from the Japanese by Jay Rubin :new:
:bulletblack: Kafka on the Shore - Haruki Murakami, 2002, translated from the Japanese by Philip Gabriel
:bulletblack: Operation Shylock - Philip Roth, 1993
:bulletblack: All Passion Spent - Vita Sackville-West, 1927
:bulletblack: The Reader - Bernhard Schlink, 1995, translated from the German by Carol Brown Janeway :new:
:bulletblue: Diary of a Mad, Old Man - Junichirō Tanizaki, 1961, translated from the Japanese by Howard Hibbett
:bulletblue: The Key - Junichirō Tanizaki, 1956, translated from the Japanese by Howard Hibbett
:bulletblue: Breakfast of Champions - Kurt Vonnegut, 1973
:bulletblack: The Picture of Dorian Gray - Oscar Wilde, 1891
:bulletblack: To the Lighthouse - Virginia Woolf, 1927

Graphic novels/comics

Short story collections

:bulletblack: Herotica 2 - edited by Susie Bright and Joani Blank, 1991
:bulletblack: Herotica 3 - edited by Susie Bright, 1994
:bulletblack: The Best American Erotica, 1993 - edited by Susie Bright
:bulletblue: Where I'm Calling From: New and Selected Stories - Raymond Carver, 1988
:bulletblack: The Mammoth Book of Best New Erotica Vol 7 - edited by Maxim Jakubowski, 2008
:bulletred: The Mammoth Book of International Erotica - edited by Maxim Jakubowski, 1996
:bulletblue: Stories 1904 - 1924 - Franz Kafka, translated from the German by JA Underwood
:bulletblack: Perineum: Nether Parts of the Empire - Ambarish Satwik, 2007

Children's fiction

:bulletblue: Stories from Ladakh - Kusum Kapur, 1994

Poetry anthologies

:bulletblue: The Forward book of poetry 1995

Poetry collections

:bulletblack: Women in Dutch Painting - Eunice de Souza, 1988
:bulletblue: Kala Ghoda Poems - Arun Kolatkar, 2004 :new:
:bulletblack: The Cinnamon Peeler: Selected Poems - Michael Ondaatje, 1989
:bulletblue: The Eyes - Don Paterson, 1999
:bulletblack: The Lunar Visitations - Sudeep Sen, 1990

Plays

Non-fiction

:bulletblue: Madness and Civilisation - Michel Foucault, 1961, translated from the French by Richard Howard
:bulletblack: How Poetry Works - Phil Roberts, 2000

Miscelleneous


Movies watched/watched again in 2009

Full list here

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